Comments : He Shoots And Sinks Our Ships (English Sonnet)

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Sorry I haven't any words!!

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    Oh Ben what a beauty of a sauntering sonnet :)
    'The beauty of the moon is pocked with scars''

    A health heart and love lies world's apart'
    Damn finery fella

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ben, the title shoots! The questions placed within are the very questions each loving heart will ask. Always an array of if and whys...

    Yes, love does unfasten the bolts that keep us and we often find ourselves adrift after the fairy tale ride...with only scars left.

    The ending just spelled: truth.

    Truly an excellent piece! AWESOME.

    • 4 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks for your time and comment.

  • 4 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Very clever Ben, love the Italian flavor in your Sonnet poetry. Again, Michael touched on the special lines I really liked; The beauty of the moon is pocked with scars;
    A healthy heart and love lie worlds apart. Wow what a neat description of a heart that has many wounds. Nominated before Em?

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    (<3) love button for sure!

    Ben, not sure what else I can say that hasn't already been said. Your amazing words always create such a masterpiece! And your rhyming is wonderful- you'll never be out of a job ;) I was going to copy and paste my favorite lines but then realized I would have just copied the whole thing lol.

    Fantastic write once again! Take care :)

  • 4 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Benny - You wont see this for a while.
    However DAMN!!!! This like all your other pieces are amazing. I am stumped at how one person can have so much tellent! No wonder its worn you down!!!

    I have to favourite this!.. I love it.

    We shall speak soon friend. xx

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, you are the sonnet king-this is no exception-you are really the writer we all inspire to be-well done my friend-

  • 4 months ago

    by The Po whet

    Ben...If Shakespeare was alive accidentally today...he'd be jealous. You always write amazing pieces.

  • 4 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    I agree. You are in the league of Shakespeare - he would not be jealous, but would hold the conversation with you. Beautiful, yet again. X

    • 4 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you to everyone for their time reading and commenting on this.