Comments : After April

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Holy smokes....

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Don't bury me in sadness! Beautiful poem and heart-wrenching one! Great piece!

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very good. Your style reminds me of another poet on this site, but I can't quite place it at the minute.

    Anyway, as above, this is a very good piece of writing indeed.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Sai

      That's interesting. I'd love to know if you remember.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Wow!! This is excellent! And so well written! Fantastic job!

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Another fascinating write. I really like your style. A lot of food for thought with this. You seem to have many layers of story within-well done-

  • 6 years ago

    by Aegis

    "I have strange dreams
    where I pluck the world from the blackness
    of the universe, and fold it neatly in half."

    Loving that imagery so much! Fantastic write:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Well penned!
    Great piece....

  • 6 years ago

    by E. J. Iverson

    Brilliant write. I love the emotions that radiate with each line. It feels like a long, deep journey of growth from the beginning to end, all summed up within a poem. Your style is wonderful. Also, the ending- it's so strong definite, I love it.

    I'm definitely excited to read more of your work!