Reborn (Reverse Senryu)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Jun 14, 2017


You are the flower blooming
I am the seed with
fresh roots - reborn from your grace

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  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a thoroughly clever piece, Jessica. I have come to expect little else from your formed poetry.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

  • 6 years ago

    by gopi nath

    good one

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    The sentiment in this is fab well my interpretation is.. I feel you being the seed is helping this flower grow with love etc.. probably wrong but imo it's sweet.

    E

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Lovely! It's like talking about God's grace. Beautifully done!

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