The day you enter in my life
I saw purity in your eyes
You made me to walk and crawl the floor
You showed the hights of peak where I seek,
You made me tall by your fall,
You made me the coolest moon and you took the hottest sun,
I taught you will be the for my gain,
But you had been there to take away my pain,
God called my dad for an end,
My dad said my son please take care of yourself in the end,
Suddenly I was blind folded by his love he showed in the end,
I pleeded God not to take my light,
Finally god made my life with darkest light to say he is long gone.
I personaly dedicate this poem for my dad he is n no more :-(:-(
Hi, Gopi. What a sad thing to know. Is it just recently? Sending love and comfort to you. For me, this poem is full of your adoration for your dad. I think that you are really doing well with writing longer pieces. Just be aware of some words that are misspelled such as hights instead of heights, pleeded instead of pleaded. Also, the word taught in the third stanza may be 'thought' if I am to read the line. You are doing excellently and I am very happy to read your poems! Hope you are well.