Comments : My dad

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi, Gopi. What a sad thing to know. Is it just recently? Sending love and comfort to you. For me, this poem is full of your adoration for your dad. I think that you are really doing well with writing longer pieces. Just be aware of some words that are misspelled such as hights instead of heights, pleeded instead of pleaded. Also, the word taught in the third stanza may be 'thought' if I am to read the line. You are doing excellently and I am very happy to read your poems! Hope you are well.

    • 4 months ago

      by gopi nath

      Thanks mossi for support and encourage.recently my dad passed away so I got this glimpse to jot down

    • 4 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Oh, so sorry to hear that, Gopi. May God comfort you in your sorrow. Everything happens for a reason, that's for sure. Be strong.

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi gopi

    Such a brave and heart-breaking write

    Well done and thank you for sharing your sadness

    Michael :)