Comments : Old Friends Meet for the First Time

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    This is shamazeballs!!! So very beautiful

    • 1 month ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much sweet Em!! And thank you so much for the nomination!! Wow! <3

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awwwwwww......this is magical, Soldier and Cowgirl! As in magical! I'm sorry but for the number one fan of #TT, this just made me so happy for reasons I don't understand...hehe. Form-wise this is so excellent but content wise...there is magic in the honesty and pure friendship in this! #TT Forever. hahaha

    • 1 month ago

      by Ren

      <3 <3 <3

      Dear Lady!! Thank you so very much for your amazing and kind words!! We're so glad you liked it!! :D
      Thank you again!!

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Hey guys

    lovely collaboration, of two incredible poets with beautiful imagination

    a wonderful piece

    Michael :)))

    • 1 month ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Michael! :D

  • 1 month ago

    by Aries Rising

    Cracking effort you two, absolutely smashed it

    Craig

    • 1 month ago

      by Ren

      Thank you Craig!! :D

  • 1 month ago

    by Ren

    Our beautiful brain baby lol <3

    Thank you so much for reading everyone and for all y'alls amazing comments!!! Y'all are the best!! :D

    • 1 month ago

      by Tony

      First of many ; )

  • 1 month ago

    by Tony

    Wow! Posted this at 2am and went back to sleep, come back and its nominated lol. Thanks for all of the love everyone, hope it was as much fun reading as it was writing.

  • 1 month ago

    by Alec

    I for one am shocked. My collab partner cheated on me!

    All seriousness great job you two. Killed it.

    • 1 month ago

      by Ren

      Hahaha thanks Alec, sorry for stealing your partner ;)

    • 1 month ago

      by Tony

      Well if you weren't an absent writing parner I wouldn't have had to go looking elsewhere lol

    • 1 month ago

      by Alec

      You two killed it

  • 1 month ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    AW awesome job you two !! everyone has kinda covered it all. :)

    • 1 month ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much hon!! :)

  • 1 month ago

    by DarkLight

    I click the feeling.
    Beautifully penned

    • 1 month ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much! :)

  • 1 month ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    Personally I love this piece because I feel like it describes an aspect of living in an age with so much technology and how so many of us meet know and love these people around us, only we don't know the exact timber of their voices or the full color of their stories. And I know that I've dabbled in this idea myself or knowing someone without ever really "meeting" them, so I love seeing that it can successfully be penned and explained. But even more than that, and specifically to this piece, it was incredible that a piece so lengthy and lingering on the edge of boring in the format department was able to entice me so much. That really shows that Tony has found a great sense of voice and word choice, which are so very invaluable to poets - especially when the piece is a little long winded or maybe not the most creative in other aspects. Great write and I'm so happy to have come across this this week.

    • 1 month ago

      by Alec

      Personally, I love this piece because it is "obviously" a conversation between two talented poets each playing off of the other's last stanza, not creative in the least you guys. Tsk tsk tsk... but what do I know? And my short attention span made it really hard to keep up with this long winded piece... you should shorten it to 4 stanzas so we can keep up.