From your own words, the beauty of poetry is, how powerful pieces come through situations. This is a powerful write of reminiscing the past. It's splendidly worded and full of raw and honest emotions. This has somehow a sad tinge though....bittersweet as the title suggests. Another breathtaking piece from you!
HOLY COW MICHAEL! This is extraordinary writing and so beautifully written! I am speechless! You paint such a vivid picture and your word choice is phenomenal! I agree with the Dear Lady, it is raw and honest and absolutely touching! Amazing job! I could never read such a gorgeous write and walk away without nominating! I am covered in goosebumps!
Thank you Em
Lovely words which mean so much :)
Much love back atcha ya
10 months ago
by Ben Pickard
Michael, good fellow, I may not be able to give you goose bumps like some of the ladies on here, but by heaven, I'll do my best!
This is super writing indeed and one of the better pieces I've read recently.