Comments : Bitter-sweet memories

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    From your own words, the beauty of poetry is, how powerful pieces come through situations. This is a powerful write of reminiscing the past. It's splendidly worded and full of raw and honest emotions. This has somehow a sad tinge though....bittersweet as the title suggests. Another breathtaking piece from you!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Arrh, Miss M such lovely words thank you :)

      A beautiful memory of younger days, and the spoils of what adults then didn't understand. Instead judgements are projected from what lies within them

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    HOLY COW MICHAEL! This is extraordinary writing and so beautifully written! I am speechless! You paint such a vivid picture and your word choice is phenomenal! I agree with the Dear Lady, it is raw and honest and absolutely touching! Amazing job! I could never read such a gorgeous write and walk away without nominating! I am covered in goosebumps!

    (<3)^Love button has been pressed!!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Ren :)
      Your lovely comments give me goose bumps. Thank you for such wonderful words. Full of inspiration, as always :)
      Much love x

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    I have no words other than I'm so glad it's nominated. Your words always move me whether it be happy or sad, they move me.

    Much love

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em
      Lovely words which mean so much :)
      as always
      Much love back atcha ya

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, good fellow, I may not be able to give you goose bumps like some of the ladies on here, but by heaven, I'll do my best!
    This is super writing indeed and one of the better pieces I've read recently.

    All the very best as ever,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      I can feel those goose-bumps Ben (between you and me..haha)

      Thanks fella, your words are as many others, are very inspirational.
      Very much appreciated :)