Comments : "Distract Me..."

  • 11 months ago

    by Michael

    Bless you Ren
    I wish I could distract you to help :(

    ....although I could dance like a chicken if it helps :)

    Much warmth and love
    With a sad but wonderful write
    Michael xx

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Michael! I appreciate the chicken dance! Very amusing :) thank you for the kind words and love! I truly appreciate them! Much love and light to you!

  • 11 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Dear Cowgirl! This is a simply beautiful write! I mean, really, really beautiful write! And my, your words are like a slap in my face...because I have been there with the much-needed distraction. Michael is going to dance for you. I can distract you too. Hehe. So please, cheer up. :-)

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      My sweet Dear Lady- Thank you so much for your beautiful and kind words! You are so sweet! I appreciate you so much!! Now we can both sit back and enjoy Michael doing the chicken dance for us ;)
      Thank you so much, again, it means a lot. <3

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An effective piece, helped not least by the breathless layout.

    All the very best as ever, Ren.

    Ben

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Ben :) I really appreciate it!

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    This is a sad piece imo.. we all need some kind of distractions and when they don't come is when we feel alone.
    Much love

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      My words exactly. Thank you so much sweet Em, and much love to you!

  • 11 months ago

    by Maher

    This is how I feel when I don't have coffee. It's also how I feel when I stupidly end up having coffee at night because I couldn't in the morning. I've been looking for distractions for hours now but I've ran out of things to do. So I'm sitting in my room, buzzing on caffeine and looking for paperclips to play with until it wears off. I know it's not what the poem was intended to mean or be about, and I apologise if what I said seems like a joke, but it just fit my mood so well when I read it. The layout even suits my breathing. It's even worse when old unwanted memories creep in and linger.

    Awesome write dudette, very well done :)

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Lol, Maher! This comment is awesome. And so fitting. And you thought I sounded like I was jumping around in text?! This is priceless. I understand those caffeine buzzes. Hope you found enough paperclips lol. But you're right, the old memories are the worse. Thank you for reading and the comment Dude!! I appreciate it :)

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I hate these nights and have them frequently! I often turn to netflix..
    So lets sit Ren and watch disney movies together!!!

    Also beautiful poem.

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Aww my dear lover! I appreciate this comment so much! I absolutely love Disney movies!! Thank you so much <3

      And wow! Just saw the nomination! Thank you so so very much! I was not expecting that! You are too kind! :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Tony

    Put earbuds in and your favorite playlist on repeat. Let your mind wander adrift on the sweet soundwaves as your fears recede with the shores of the corporeal; ride the current to good dreams. I'll be waiting cowgirl. Ready for a dance to chords of colors swirling around us, subtitled with rhyming words of poetry.

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Keep pressing that button, Tony, and we're in trouble lol. You know I have no words because they color my face instead. This is so incredibly sweet! Thank you so much <3

  • 11 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I read Tony's comment and I almost died.... Yay, dear Cowgirl! Let me just say, #TT forever!

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Dear Lady, you make me laugh! Lol! But yes I agree. I almost died, too haha <3
      #TT

  • 3 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    This is a beautiful peice with such deep, emotional meaning behind it. & so well written. Will be adding to favs. Thanks for the lovely comment on my peice as well (:

    • 3 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! I truly appreciate it :) and you're absolutely welcome! Take care!