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by gopi nath Jun 20, 2017
Love, romance /
you lay your head on my chest,
to feel my heart beat,
you want to stand on me,
to feel the pain of my feeti want to see your reflection,
but i wish, i could be your mirror to see you,
my sound of love is def to you,
i wish i could be your,'s ears to feel the sound
Sweet piece here :)
by Ben Pickard
Interestingly written. I enjoyed this.
All the best,
Hi gopi :)
I feel this piece is so heartfelt. I sense you write with such emotion and a deepness, and I also sense a language barrier, which adds to your writing. There is much substance within your piece's.
Keep it coming and well done
Hi Gopi! I agree with Michael. It's amazing to me how your message is always felt, your emotions are so transparent despite some little language barrier. Good job, Gopi!
by gopi nath
thank you for support Michel:0)