Comments : pain

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    This is really good :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Thomas

    You did a nice job of coming full-circle with the narrator's head pointing down in the opening stanza, to the rusty sign pointed down in the closing stanza.

    A quite morose poem, but well-written with good structure and well-chosen rhyming. Well done!

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved the rhyme and rhythm of this piece and particularly the libe "I'm loyal to this street its simply called hurt" it turned a walk down the street into a walk through emotional turmoil. Very enjoyable read

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    Wow!! This is excellent! Well done!

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Well done on your win gopi, I'm am so very pleased for you :))

    Michael

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    It's a great piece and I'm happy it won. Congratulations, Gopi! :-)

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win!

  • 5 months ago

    by gopi nath

    Thanks for the support and love but this credit goes to my galfriend anitha

  • 5 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    Pain comes in various shades and images and this one is well
    penned with well chosen rhymes and short sentences which
    brings out images without any struggle. Its natural…the pain
    the sadness and the heaviness all rolled up as the author walks
    the street…a well written piece.

    Just one minor thing: “My sidewalk is covered, with sorrow
    an dirt.” I think you meant “sorrow and dirt”…other then that
    I liked this.

    Keep penning and welcome to the site!

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well done on your win x

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your front page win-well done-

  • 5 months ago

    by hiraeth

    This poem is plagiarized.

    Source: https://allpoetry.com/poem/11946387-Town-of-Sad-by-Angel-Akintoye
    https://www.facebook.com/LovePoems786/posts/10152000746522706a

  • 5 months ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    our apologies to all members. We have to admit we fell down on the job here and did no realize this poem was not written by the member posting it.
    It will be removed.