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by gopi nath Jun 23, 2017
Love, romance /
my mind rebels over a soft touch of your skin,
but people say that i have committed a sin
things aren't same before,
i was humble to know the truth
i taught she was here to say i am there for you,
but,she turned her back and said i am leaving you,
cries and tears never kept me alive,
but,my love inside you drove me and feel i am alive again.
A heart-felt piece gopi and an emotional piece. Difficult when we experience loss of any kind
Best wishes my friend
by Ben Pickard
As Mel says, a sad piece but with a touch of hope at the end there.
All the best,
by gopi nath
thank u ben
Aww, Gopi, this is sad but so sweet! Well done.
thank u ;)
by Larry Chamberlin