I need you

by Em   Jun 23, 2017


I

Needed
Every ounce of your
Existence to comfort my
Disastrous mental health but

You
Only made things
Uncomfortably sombre.

© Em

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  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Em, this is a hard hitting write. You think you do but you really do not need that person. People like that hurt and harm, not lift up and support you. Take care and hugs to you!

    • 6 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you all. <3

  • 6 months ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Omg em. This is a great piece. So much felt in so little words. Good job.

  • 6 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent piece EM.

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Good little acrostic here, Em, which manages to cut as precisely to the point as other, less limiting forms so well done for that.

    All the best and I hope you're well,

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Em

      Thanks all.
      Michael you're right but in my mind I do lol ...
      Ben I'm ok as expected hope you are x

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Em,

    Really like this acrostic. The only puzzle to me is it seems that you 'don't need' someone who made things uncomfortable for you. Or am I not seeing something within this piece haha!

    With warmth

    Michael :)

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