Comments : The Enemy

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mel, this is excellent. Nominated.

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hi Ben, thank you for your appreciation and for the nomination. :-)

  • 1 year ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    I love this. 'She died in between her eyes and the mirror'. So beautifully put

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      Glad you loved it, Ms. Angela. :-)

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Wonderful piece Miss M
    well done

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wonderful piece! Well done. Im glad its been nominated :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    Dearest Lady! This is an amazing write by you! Excellent job!

    (<3)^Click!

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      My dear Cowgirl, thank you! And I miss you! :-)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This is so relatable it's unbelievable

  • 1 year ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Deep stuff lurks in those spaces, the minds image creates a seeming reality that is too hard to bear. Good work Mel. 5/5

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    WELL DONE!! Miss M, rely pleased for you

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by RustySoul

    Great write Mel Liz. Congratulations on the win!!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    Congrats beautiful Lady!! So happy to see this on the front page today!! :) *dances*

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      Yay, I love your dance! Thank you dear Cowgirl!

      And thank you Michael and Rusty!

  • 1 year ago

    by Nicko

    Hi Mel Liz, congrats on your win, great to see you on the the front page. Lovely poem, well done!

  • 1 year ago

    by Alex Penuelas

    This is awesome!

  • 1 year ago

    by nani

    A VERY well deserved win! I absolutely love this!

    Nani :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Mahesh Kachare

    Wow what a great poem

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you so very much Alex, Nani and Mahesh!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    JUDEGS COMMENT:
    The enemy by mossgirl19 4 points
    To me this needs recognising because in my opinion it'll resonate with atleast a quarter of us on the site as I have come across many that write (some daily) about depression and the feelings they feel but this is done in the most simplest way which is rather intriguing to me to see and I think it's a pretty raw and personal view on how this poetess' perceives themselves unfortunately. I love the spacing too because it's done in a way that makes you pause? for breath and gives you time to digest what has been written