Comments : Free Me

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    'Every day we rise, we strive'

    ^^

    That's all we can ever do, Craig. Great piece and nominated.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Indeed it is and thank you dude

      Craig

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Craig,

    This is beautiful, sentimental and definitely strong. Great write! :-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    We are sometimes our own worst enemy and when you spend alot of time by yourself well you need an escape..

    Em

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Yup. Even if sometimes it's only in literature.

      Xxx

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    No words...this is fantastic, Craig...

    (<3)^click!

    "Heros we were not born to be
    But everyone has that inner fight
    Regretted acts, and deeds endured
    Every day we rise, we strive"
    ^^
    One day at a time...one foot in front of the other...

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      One foot in front of the other one step at a time

      X

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Take me away from this place
    Abduct me from myself

    ^^The first line sounded like you were telling someone
    dear to take you away with that person. But the second line...yes a
    twister this is a thing I wish I could do too!

    Yet I still accept this this task

    ^^I think one "this" will do here..

    From this dark place I need to move
    Reclaim what once was good
    Ominous unbridled thoughts flow
    With the melancholy memories of a fool

    ^^That is the moment where no matter how hard you
    try you can't run away from the past and the wrongs committed
    which makes you not like you at all. Pity we can't hide or throw it
    away from our mind but retains as a lesson for life.

    Heros we were not born to be
    But everyone has that inner fight
    Regretted acts, and deeds endured
    Every day we rise, we strive

    ^^and this is life we learn from our mistakes and every time
    we are about to do something it comes up as a reminder. Each day is a
    struggle and each day we have to learn to survive and be good.

    A write that makes a reader to sit back and agree...take care

    • 6 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      As always Meena very insightful comments

      Thank you

      Craig