Comments : Lost you

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Very heart-felt piece Em

    'but nothing pains me more than
    you breathing your final breath'
    wow a really powerful couple of lines

    Warmth as always

    Michael :)

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Love this, Em.

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Sometimes the wind it howls
    and frightens me to death
    but nothing pains me more than
    you breathing your final breath.

    ^^ this... damn girl!!! =/ what a beautiful piece..

    • 3 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you all <3

  • 3 months ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    Wow! This is nice.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    Oh my gosh, Sweet Em! This is such an excellent and beautifully written piece! Amazing job! The format and rhyming are flawless! Well done! Much love to you!!

    • 3 months ago

      by Em

      Thank you both x