Comments : A treat to repeat (English sonnet)

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    What a comeback, Michael and please take me to this beautiful treat! How magical was the trip that I hope to repeat reading this once more, just for the feels of it. This did not only make me smile, but I floated somewhere. Just what a piece of beautiful poetry does. :-)

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Oh Miss M...well never stop wishing for your treats in life, and even if they are never granted. We have the miracles of our imagination :)
      Thank you for lovely warm words as ever :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, you know how I love a sonnet and this one is excellent. They are so difficult to get right. This has the three quatrains and required couplet, the correct rhyme scheme and ten syllables per line, so well done indeed.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben for your lovely words. And nice to have a feeling of appreciation for sonnets. I actually love them :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    If Mel Liz gets to go, I wanna go, too! What a magical and awe-inspiring write, Michael! An excellent read right before I try and close my eyes finally for a few hours of rest. Thank you for the amazing visuals- hoping for some interesting dreams! Really though, amazing writing, as always! Truly enjoyed reading this beautiful write :)

    andddd....

    (<3)^ Love button!

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Aww... Miss Ren, you are really too much (all good I mean haha)

    well I hope it does help with weary eyes and dream sweet things :)

    thank you :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    Like music to my ears. Beautiful Michael

    Em

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Ahh, Thank you Em,
      Bit of music to the ears, sometimes helps :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful sonnet with great visuals - loved it x

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Bless you Milly and thank you :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Hope

    I love this! Please write more like this!

    • 5 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Hope :)