to exhale the last of our love (syntuit)

by Ben Pickard   Jun 28, 2017


My lungs collapsed and
the joy was squeezed from my heart
when you decided...

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Ben Pickard 2017

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  • 1 month ago

    by Britt

    Judging comments: Talk about an absolute punch to all the feelings! This poem was so small and simple but the context was anything but. I felt the words as they came upon the screen. I love how it was ended with the ...'s, a point where we can hang on, taper off, and exhale it all out. Beautiful gut punch of a poem - that's what I Love to see!

    • 1 month ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Britt - thank you and thank you for your time as judge.

  • 3 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    Brilliant! Sir.

  • 4 months ago

    by Hope

    I wish the I knew the mystery to this syntuit...but I love it!

  • 4 months ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Breathtaking, heartbreaking. Amazing!

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Ben! I am blown away! AMAZING!!!!!

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