Comments : You asked me...

  • 11 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Ren - I love this. It is amazing and raw and just wow..
    Well done. xxxx

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Wow!! Thank you so so much! I seriously appreciate your kinds words!! <3

  • 11 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Cowgirl! This is so beautiful... So raw! This is captivating and excellently done! I love this!

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Aww thank you so much my dear sweet Lady! I truly love and appreciate your comments! <3

  • 11 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is absolutely lovely.

    Mucho love button hitting and deffo favorites

    Craig

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much, Craig! That means a lot to me!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Michael

    'wound of my broken heart
    ripped back open with the
    force of forgotten promises'

    Ren, phew! What an incredible piece and really resonated with me, and I love that :)
    Fab writing lady :)

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Michael! :) I always love your kind and amazing comments!

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A really well written piece, Ren. The ending is spot on and highly effective.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much, Ben!! I really appreciate your comment! It means a lot :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    OMG this brought a tear to my eye!!

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Aww thank you so much for reading and commenting Sweet Em!! <3

  • 11 months ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Omg ren. I can literally feel the heartbreak in this piece like holy crap.
    I'm glad this has been nominated.

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Wow! Thank you very much!! I truly appreciate that!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Nobody

    this resonates really deeply with me. I loved the ending especially

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!

  • 11 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, Wow to this write. You tore me apart with every thought you put into this. It brings all lost love and failed relationships right there and smacks you in the face. Love this!

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Wow Brenda! Thank you so much!! I truly appreciate you and your comment!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Amazing piece. Visuals and emotions conveyed brilliantly. A masterpiwce

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much! I truly appreciate your kind words!

  • 11 months ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    I love your poems! :)

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much!! :)

  • 11 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    This is beautifully written. Thoroughly enjoyed it

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Michael

    Hey Miss Ren
    Well done on your HM :)

    Michael

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Michael!! :) I appreciate it!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Phil

    Holy smokes I am speechless.

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you for reading and commenting, Phil!!

  • 11 months ago

    by nani

    God damn girl! This gave me chills! What a powerful and beautiful poem. It took my breath away completely. Your writing is just flawless as always. Absolutely love this! Congrats on the HM!

    Nani :)

    • 11 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you boo!! <3 I appreciate it!!

  • 10 months ago

    by WritingtheStars

    This is amazing

    • 10 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!!

  • 7 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment

    "You Asked Me..." By Ren 7 points

    A breathtakingly beautiful write, which once started takes the reader on a journey of sheer delight.

    The entire work sets the reader up for the ending, which is definitely an oh moment.

    The whole thing links together in a perfect way, It is just unfortunate that things of beauty can so often be tinged with sadness. However the sadness in this poem does not detract from the enjoyment of its reading.

    Well done (7)

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thanks so much Craig!! I truly appreciate it!!