Comments : Drunken nights

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Wow! Missy N.
    That's it just wow!
    and wonderfully written

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    All I can say is I truly wish I had a vote left because this is beautifully raw.

    Em x

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you Em. Xx

      I actually just wrote this to spit it out. My poetry has kind of turned into my many thoughts and ramblings..

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Wow! This is so raw and beautifully written! Well done, hon, and so much love and peace to you, as always! <3

  • 6 years ago

    by Phil

    such emotion and rawness within this that I was gripped. I do think it'd be much more affective if it was centred but that is just my opinion and usually I am wrong lol

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you phil. I actually tried to edit it so the drunk and drunken were all over the place but it straightened them..

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Nams, I like your layout of this a lot. It tells a chilling story too, how much this has cost you. Strong, stay strong.

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    It's good to know in the end of the poem you quitted drinking.
    It means You are a strong person; a request overcome the darkness too.

    Devil himself requesting!

    • 6 years ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      If only i had stayed sober ! Seems old habits die hard !!
      I will try lucifer.. i really will, but the darkness resides deep within the soul.