Comments : I Wish

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh my, this is so sweet, so touching!

  • 3 months ago

    by Phil

    This good fella reduced me to man tears, It is very touching

  • 3 months ago

    by Jamie

    Nominated. This is a great write, and the flow, story and rhyming are well done!

    • 3 months ago

      by Matt Carroll

      Thank you very much.I just started writing again, trying to get back in the swing of things.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    OMG this is soooo sweet and incredibly beautiful- and the rhyming is amazing. Well done!