Comments : Murderous Hand

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Wow! Miss Milly
    What a an incredible dark piece of rhyming.
    Powerful with a punch
    Well done

    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    What a very dark piece, Milly! The imagery is eerie.

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    What a very dark piece, Milly! The imagery is eerie.

  • 2 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    One word.. nominated. This is awesome milly

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent, Milly. Certainly dark, but really good.
    It's funny, I just read a book called 'The Husband's secret' (my wife recommended it) and it has a similar theme: A good woman, beautiful, who seemed to twist the man who loved her into this dreadful, jealous monster. I won't ruin it, just in case!
    All the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 2 months ago

    by Phil

    astounding work Milly

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Milly! This is amazing! Dark, foreboding, great story line. Nicely rhymed through-out. Well done-

  • 2 months ago

    by Ren

    Just...WOW!

    (<3)^Click!

    Amazing write!

    • 2 months ago

      by Milly Hayward

      Wow what a lovely surprise. I just logged on and found so many lovely comments. Thank you so much you really made my day. I'm trying to explore different ways of writing so this is a wonderful response. Thanks again everyone for all the lovely feedback xx

  • 2 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Nice work Milly, dark indeed, I especially liked those last lines; Devil rubs his hands with glee
    there's nowhere left for you to flee
    life's unravelling with just cause
    murder by the hand that's yours
    In life we can be self haters and our own worst enemies, the Devil to please!
    So much Talent in the UK, Nice work!

  • 2 months ago

    by Frank

    This is a well constructed and rhymed piece dear Milly. Darkness is incurable as it should be if you kill someone_ specially someone beautiful out of the ugliness and envy -
    This reminds me of the Salieri's tormented conscience at the end of the Milos Forman's master piece:: Amadeus. The incurable darkness in this movie is frightening, ( like in your piece) when during his confession to the priest in the end of his life, he reveals, that how he tormented the Mozart's soul systematically, to the death, only because he was more talented than him.

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    I have no words for this Milly without duplicating what everyone else has said.

  • 2 months ago

    by Matt Carroll

    This is on point. Descriptive and full of imagery. Keep it up!

  • 2 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Milly - my goodness, I loved this poem! I can see the picture so clear in my mind. Well done!

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats, Milly!

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Milly
    What a wonderful way to start your sonnet journey :)
    Brilliant well done so pleased for you

    Much love
    Michael x

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    A well deserved win that's for sure. :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Milly, congratulations on your front page win! This write really rocked!

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Sorry Milly
    Sonnet on the brain at the mo-silly Michael
    But my comments do not change
    and well done a second time

    Much love

    Michael x

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A huge thanks to everyone who voted for me and for Naomi for nominating. I've never had so many votes for a poem pre competition and it means more than the world that people liked it so much. Thank you again for all your kind comments and support. Milly xx

  • 2 months ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win, Milly! :)