Comments : Quick Poem & Letter III

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    So glad to read a new post from you. Breathtaking yet again. There is so much longing and hoping in this one. Loving is never easy, I guess.

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Dear hiraeth,

    I feel like writing a letter, just breaking down your very incredible piece of writing. Happily blown away :)
    So much beauty in this poem, so much of everything.

    Simply wonderful

    Michael :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mark, the delicacy and craft of your writing never ceases to amaze me.

    All the best.

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful, such detail and imagery - I feel this is a poem that no matter how many times I read it I will discover more and more hidden depths to it like the petals of a flower.. loved it x

  • 4 months ago

    by ether

    boy oh boy does this bring the feels. you teleported me right back to an old relationship (from nearly a decade ago) where everything in this could be twisted to match that senario. although i'm sure everyone can relate to this to a certain extent. you caught the essence of human vulnerability so seamlessly.

    i cannot help but feel as though if this piece were written on paper it would slowly dissolve to ash in your hands, departing in the softest breeze, line by line. or if this were to be spoken, it would be spoken on a cool winters night, walking down a semi rural street, with your words turning straight in to steam as the breath meets the atmosphere.

    very inspiring. thank you.

    • 4 months ago

      by hiraeth

      " if this piece were written on paper it would slowly dissolve to ash in your hands, departing in the softest breeze, line by line. or if this were to be spoken, it would be spoken on a cool winters night, walking down a semi rural street, with your words turning straight in to steam as the breath meets the atmosphere. "

      No, thank you. That was beautiful. :)