Comments : Incomprehension

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    What a mind-blowing piece, Michael. Your word choice is great! The rhythm too is great, and the mood is intensified with all the semi-colons/pauses.

    Time and time again the same desolation is faced by the world...same routine. And hope...has died. A great write!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M for your wonderful comments :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, your works are getting better and better and I admire you for your strength and bravery as I feel this is related to your forum post though I may be wrong. Your word choice is sublime.
    I was going to comment fully but I just couldn't

    Em.x

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Em,
      Certainly all connected, but from a good place now. Reflection, great for the soul and expressed :)
      Lovely inspiration x

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A strong piece with great dark and emotional depth. A most enjoyable read. Milly x

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly, for your lovely words. Yes the darker side of true writing :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent, good man, and I particularly like the way it is formatted.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben, my good man :)
      your words mean a lot

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, a powerful write written beautifully. Each of your writes have gained strength and confidence. I really liked it a lot.

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Oh Miss Brenda, such inspiring words, thank you so much

      much love

      Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    I agree with what everyone has said so far. This is such a strong and emotional write, Mr. Michael, and very well written!! Your writing is amazing, as always, and I agree with Ben- I really like the format of this! Well done, kind sir :) much love and peace to you always!

    • 6 years ago

      by Michael

      Hey Miss Ren
      Thank you so much, such inspirational words, which as ever mean so so much :)x