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Nominated! I love the emotion in this, because they are very real. And well spoken
by Ben Pickard
Clever rhyme scheme here, Em. First three lines rhyme and the last three rhyme. Not usual and nicely done.
All the best,
Agreed! And the sentiment is just so true.
I feel the hurt in this sad piece, along with pain
A well rhymed poem, with much going -on
by Milly Hayward
Love the rhyme and emotion another good piece x
I see the white lie in this poem....great poem, keep writing.
Beautiful write, Sweet Em, and very well written and rhymed. So much love to you, hon!!
Nicely done Em. I like your rhyming, flowed beautifully. Hugs-