Comments : Don't know what hurts more

  • 5 months ago

    by Jamie

    Nominated! I love the emotion in this, because they are very real. And well spoken

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Clever rhyme scheme here, Em. First three lines rhyme and the last three rhyme. Not usual and nicely done.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 5 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Agreed! And the sentiment is just so true.

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Em,
    I feel the hurt in this sad piece, along with pain
    A well rhymed poem, with much going -on

    Much warmth

    Michael :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Love the rhyme and emotion another good piece x

  • 5 months ago

    by Hope

    I see the white lie in this poem....great poem, keep writing.

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful write, Sweet Em, and very well written and rhymed. So much love to you, hon!!

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely done Em. I like your rhyming, flowed beautifully. Hugs-