Comments : July 10th

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Aww, Queen Brenda, I had goosebumps reading the story behind July 10th. It is very sad. How time slips by...but memories just don't.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Lady Mel, thank you so much. Memories, good, bad, never fully fade. The hurt softens in time but that hole in your heart never quite closes up.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Brenda
    Such a heart-felt piece of a time past. Loss at such an early age, can be a bit blurry but never forgotten. A sad but wonderful write from you

    Much love and warmth
    Michael :)x

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Michael, thank you! There are significant things that you never forget, this is one of them. It definitely shaped my life. Hugs to you-

  • 6 years ago

    by Lvi

    Brenda,
    the way you describe your feelings presses the idea that such unfortunate wounds can never heal completely.

    The opening stanza totally gripped me.Those beautiful summer mornings, sometimes drown you in the memories they carry.

    This is a fantastic write.

    Take care.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Lvi, thank you so much for your insight and comments. I greatly appreciate you. It is weird isn't it how memories can be crystal clear?

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    Okay I'm officially a blubbering mess and have no words. This is so heartbreaking, Brenda!! Beautifully written and very, very sad. So much love to you, and many, many hugs!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Ren, thank you so much. I'm sorry to make you a blubbering mess lol. He was really a good man, I miss him so much.

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brenda, I know a little about this from our conversations in the past and you know how very sorry I am for you; it is an incredible weight to bear for anyone for so long. And that is why your father would never hate you for having the odd slip in memory when the grind of daily life takes over. A memory is far more than a single day, Brenda, and there is clearly nothing wrong with yours in regards to your dad.

    Do take care and all the very best as usual,

    Ben

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Ben. Your words give great comfort. Hugs -

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    This is absolutely heart wrenching!! I cannot write properly as I have tears in my eyes.
    Much love xxx

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thank you dear Em. Sorry. I didn't mean to get everyone crying today . Hugs!

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Not often my eyes shimmer with liquid but this did it.

    Saying no more

    Craig xxx

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Craig, thank you-hugs for your shimmers....

  • 6 years ago

    by Sai

    "(...)But why did it have to be yours?"

    I got goosebumps when I reached this part. Reading poetry like this reminds a lot of people (including myself) not just to cherish the people we love while they're still here but more importantly, to show/tell them. This is beautifully written. Thank you for sharing this with us.

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Sai, thank you so much. It is true, we never realize or say how much another person means to us sometimes until it's too late.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Loosing a parent leaves us in a limbo sort of feeling..and that part of
    the memory numbs until bang that person emerges along with a whole
    lots of pain and tears...touching take care

    • 6 years ago

      by Brenda

      Meena, thank you so much. It is really true isn't it? Going along, la,la,la and BAM! I couldn't agree more.