I'm sorry that you have had so many of these experiences, and I'm glad you are writing poetry to let it all out. This was a good poem, and I really liked it.

nikki that was so gud that seemed real if it was im sorri i have been in the same place but with my mum i was o0nly six well done .

u made me cry....awesome nikki
luv jessycar xoxoxoxo

tears :(

beautiful poem!!! xx

I loved the poem I can relate in a sort of way I just lost my dad a couple of weeks ago and I only have 2 poems him but writing them makes me feel better.

~Ariana Moreno~