Mystic, this is a truly awesome first poem! I love your rhyming and your sentiments in here. I can totally relate with this war in the mind that we experience every day. A great write and welcome to the site!
Thank you for welcoming me to the site, I feel that everyone on here has been really welcoming. And yes it's lovely that me and my dad are both into writing poetry, infact he inspired me to start writing poetry just last week which is when I joined the site and I think I have found a new hobby that i love. Thank you for your kind words, yes I agree a lot of people are able to relate which i suppose allows us to not feel alone in our suffering. X