Comments : Anxiety

  • 10 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Mystic, this is a truly awesome first poem! I love your rhyming and your sentiments in here. I can totally relate with this war in the mind that we experience every day. A great write and welcome to the site!

    • 10 months ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you so much! I think it's soothing to know that we are not alone with how we feel. If we are able to relate to one another, it makes us feel more human. Thank you for welcoming me to the site :)

  • 10 months ago

    by Michael

    Clever little lady, what an amazing start to your poetry. I'm really proud of you :)

    Love Dad xx

  • 10 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A warm welcome to the site.
    This is well written and well rhymed; great first post.

    All the best and keep writing,

    Ben

  • 10 months ago

    by chandelier

    This is an amazing write, and so relatable, it's really hard to conquer anxiety. What a good way to pour it out.
    great work!
    And welcome to the site :)

    • 10 months ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Yes i agree it really is such a difficult challenge! Thank you very much x

  • 10 months ago

    by Ren

    Oh this is such an amazing write!! What a powerful piece! You capture the essence of anxiety so well, it gave me chills! Well done :) and welcome to the site!

  • 10 months ago

    by Em

    Firstly welcome to the site, I see you have a wonderful gift for poetry just like your Dad which is lovely to see even if your styles are different as that makes us unique obviously.

    Your rhyming is fabulous as is you style.
    Edit: I can truly relate to this piece too unfortunately as many of us can

    Em x

    • 10 months ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you for welcoming me to the site, I feel that everyone on here has been really welcoming. And yes it's lovely that me and my dad are both into writing poetry, infact he inspired me to start writing poetry just last week which is when I joined the site and I think I have found a new hobby that i love. Thank you for your kind words, yes I agree a lot of people are able to relate which i suppose allows us to not feel alone in our suffering. X

  • 10 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nicely penned. Your thoughts so crystal clear and eloquently put. Welcome to the site, I look forward to reading more from you. I read some other comments, I see talent runs in the family. Well done -

    • 10 months ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you Brenda, yes my dad inspired me to start writing poetry :)