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by mossgirl19 Jul 14, 2017
Fun, humor /
There are tomatoes in grandpa’s garden
He guards these red fruits like a jail warden
But one day, he turned his back
The robins came to attack
And all were eaten, all of a sudden.
I couldn't comment the first time I read this. Just wanted to say I really love this. How you've captured a moment that will last a long time in this little poem. Nostalgic and humorous as well.
Hello, Sai. It is nostalgic for me too as my inspiration in writing this is my grandpa's garden which he is very protective of. Thank you for this very heart-warming comment. :-)
Well done beautiful Lady!! :)
My dear Cowgirl! :-) I am trying to be funny. Hehe.
Miss Limerick Mel :0
What a lovely first attempt, really enjoyed this funny little piece
It's a relief to know you enjoyed the piece, Michael. The first attempt did scare me. Hehe. Thanks, Michael!
by Ben Pickard
Funny stuff, Mel. I was teaching my kids about limericks the other day and getting them to write their own to some highly amusing results!
All the best as ever,
Thanks, Ben. I think that limericks are great for kids. It's really fun coz they can exercise their creativity while being trained to abide by the rhyme scheme. And wow, they have a great teacher! ;-)
by Mahesh Kachare
What a great rhyme used in this poem. Salute to you. How nice poem it is !