Too Dark Out There (senryu)

by Ben Pickard   Jul 16, 2017


tragically, it's
always so much brighter when
the curtains are drawn.

-

Ben Pickard 2017

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  • 2 days ago

    by Britt

    Judging comments: I love that the writer used the tragic emotion - so many people would love the light to come in, but he understands the only way it can happen is through transparency, vulnerable, openness that one isn't exactly ready for or comfortable in. Beautiful little piece of poetry that made me think. Well done!

  • 1 month ago

    by Nightmare Scenario

    Job well done mate

  • 1 month ago

    by Meena Krish

    This really applies so well to life its when truth hits
    you straight in the heart and you realize how blind
    one has been..well penned and Congrats on the Win!

  • 1 month ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win!

    • 1 month ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Ren. I hope you're well.

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Well done on a well deserved win x

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