Too Dark Out There (senryu)

by Ben Pickard   Jul 16, 2017


tragically, it's
always so much brighter when
the curtains are drawn.

-

Ben Pickard 2017

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  • 1 day ago

    by Ren

    (<3) just gonna drop a few of these here...

  • 3 days ago

    by Jamie

    Officially nominated!

  • 5 days ago

    by Maher

    I don't even like senryus but this is great. I'd say more, but I'd just be repeating what others have already commented and I don't want to be 'that guy'. Nice one, Mr Pickard. Thanks for sharing :)

  • 5 days ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Benny - em has broken this to pieces before anyone could get in. Well done..

  • 5 days ago

    by Michael

    Very, very clever Ben. Nothing else to say :)

    Michael

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