She is mysterious,
an air of intrigue surrounding her.
gliding through life spontaneously,
rejecting the rules of society.
Two fishes in constant conflict,
always unsure of herself,
yet empathetically understanding of others.
Picking up on energies,
causing emotional drain if absorbed.
Easily heart broken,
but breaks hearts all the same.
JUDGES COMMENT: I am glad this young lady has decided to join our ever growing poetry site especially with wonderful pieces such as this. It may not be everyone's cup of tea but teas overrated anyway and we need more realistic (I use the term loosely) poets gracing us with their creative presence.
9 months ago
by Ben Pickard
Congratulations on your first honourable mention (hm). This could easily have been a win, to be honest. However, I have no doubt at all that you will win any number of times with the talent you have already displayed. Well done again.