The mysterious pisces

by mysticalpisces   Jul 18, 2017


She is mysterious,
an air of intrigue surrounding her.
Free flowing,
gliding through life spontaneously,
rejecting the rules of society.
Two fishes in constant conflict,
always unsure of herself,
yet empathetically understanding of others.
Picking up on energies,
causing emotional drain if absorbed.
Easily heart broken,
but breaks hearts all the same.

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  • 8 months ago

    by Em

    JUDGES COMMENT: I am glad this young lady has decided to join our ever growing poetry site especially with wonderful pieces such as this. It may not be everyone's cup of tea but teas overrated anyway and we need more realistic (I use the term loosely) poets gracing us with their creative presence.

  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Congratulations on your first honourable mention (hm). This could easily have been a win, to be honest. However, I have no doubt at all that you will win any number of times with the talent you have already displayed. Well done again.

    • 11 months ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you Ben, I really wasn't expecting it to be honest so am very very happy!! Will be writing another poem once I get back from holiday :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful flowing piece that captures pisces very well. I'm a Pisces too so can relate. Milly x

    • 11 months ago

      by mysticalpisces

      Thank you Milly, I love meeting other Pisceans as I don't know very many x

  • 11 months ago

    by Ren

    Absolutely adore this piece! Wonderfully written! Well done :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    I too am a Pisces. Totally relate to this wonderful write. Well done-

    • 1 year ago

      by mysticalpisces

      I think that we are quite a rare breed!! Thankyou. X

    • 1 year ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Taurus.

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