I was waiting for another piece from you, and you don't disappoint here. I had the feeling that there was an autobiographical element to this while reading? Not sure. Either way, I have known people like this: sensitive, passionate, mesmerizing, difficult, and always easily broken.
I study astrology in depth and have done a lot of research into pisces especially as I am one. But yes I was writing it about myself as well as piscean traits in general because I relate to all the traits. I combined my knowledge of pisces and my knowledge of myself. And yes I feel that I fit all of those words that you have listed. Pisces are the most sensitive and emotional of the zodiac. It would be interesting to know your sign? Thank you for your comment Ben!
Congratulations on your first honourable mention (hm). This could easily have been a win, to be honest. However, I have no doubt at all that you will win any number of times with the talent you have already displayed. Well done again.
JUDGES COMMENT: I am glad this young lady has decided to join our ever growing poetry site especially with wonderful pieces such as this. It may not be everyone's cup of tea but teas overrated anyway and we need more realistic (I use the term loosely) poets gracing us with their creative presence.