Comments : "If Anyone Here Knows A Reason..."

  • 4 months ago

    by The Po whet

    Ben,in very few words a deep tragic yet beautiful piece you've written.In matters of love many questions always go unanswered.

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This broke my heart, Ben. Short and yet it pierced thru my heart probably because...aww. Marriage is a commitment and...I don't know...what I know is...it's never easy.

  • 4 months ago

    by Mayday

    Whaa-! 3: Wow. This was like a kick to the gut. So heavy and sorrowful. I think it's tragic when real love really doesn't work out. I like this, Ben. Powerful poem.

  • 4 months ago

    by mysticalpisces

    Heartbreaking but very beautiful.

  • 4 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Ok benny - between you and SC id use my nominations in no time!! What a lovely relatable poem.
    Just beautiful. Well done

  • 4 months ago

    by Jamie

    Nominated ben. Love this!

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Ben you've killed my words because I am speechless again!

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Stunning as always. Perfectly written

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    Truly amazing Ben,
    A very deep emotional piece

    Much warmth

    Michael :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Damn Ben, you have been a crazily amazing writing journey as of late. That doesn't mean your previous work has been anything less than stellar but you've been dropping these gems left and right and I have been blown away. This is no exception, love it!

  • 4 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Nice Metaphor Ben, admired by Ken. Lots of depth, the organ can be the heart but also the love instrument used for the failed relationship. Unmarried but living like it was so, collapsing at the end.

  • 4 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    Hello! Sir

    This poem is truly good. I think it’s written with different mind set up. Hard times often comes in a relationship, hopefully all the best for your next declaration of love.

  • 4 months ago

    by ROAM

    Great work Ben... this really hit close to the heart as always your work is so easy to relate to.... amazing as always