Comments : Little Green Basket

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    There are somethings that I would change in this work if I wrote it, (that I wish I did write.) I am not envious but there are momentums in this piece that relates to every genuine experience of writing, how wonderful it is.

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Awww. Thank you, dear Frank.

  • 6 years ago

    by mysticalpisces

    You're very talented at poetry!

  • 6 years ago

    by Fredy RoMa0u Sanchez

    We all carry a memory of our very own "little green basket".... and it's amazing how easily I can relate to this.... great work... I'm glad this was one of the first poems I read after my Hiatus lol

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Fredy...where have you been? Hehe. Glad to see you around...thanks for the comment.

  • 6 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss M
    Such a beautiful piece of writing
    Really enjoyed reading this

    Much love

    Michael :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Brenda

    Lady Mel, we as children never really see the things our parents do for the reasons they do them. They usually become crystal clear as we get older and have kids of our own. Your write reminded me a lot of that. Loved this-

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      Awww, Queen Brenda, you are so right! Thank you.

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sometimes we fail to appreciate, recognize or reciprocate
    the care, warmth and love which was given to us and we ignore
    it...take it for granted until it hits you and hits you hard...touching.

    • 6 years ago

      by mossgirl19

      It hits hard...really hard, Ms. Meena. Thank you.

  • 6 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Judging comment

    "Little Green Basket" By Mossgirl19, 7 points.

    The poem in its entirety was completely captivating. Well written with a flowing tempo that keeps the reader engaged and nodding along.

    With regards to the content and subject matter! We are all individuals and we have our strengths and weaknesses.

    To be independent is a good thing, to be disorganised, often will also lead to good things. You still look upon that little green basket with love.

    I enjoyed this poem and it made me melt, it is truly worth its nomination and my vote.

    Thank you for sharing (7)