Comments : Pastures new (English sonnet)

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    So beautiful, Michael. Who is getting married again? Awww. :-)

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Miss M,

    ..well two friends that had very difficult times in marriage and love. Met each other on a 'Blind date' four years ago, and they seem very in love and both getting married again :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, I have been away for a week, only to return to you writing flawless sonnets. You have it with this one, good fellow. The meter, syllables, rhyme, everything - spot on. It's poetry like this that keeps me coming back to the site.
    All the very best as ever,
    Ben

  • 2 months ago

    by Bradley Peter

    A very strong piece of writing. Every line was important and giving new information, and not simply regurgitating a previous line in a different way to make a rhyme work. I also enjoyed your use of the English language, too: simple but varied.

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Thank you Bradley

    Sonnets are certainly a tough one on the mind. But really enjoy writing them :)

  • 2 months ago

    by mysticpisces

    Beautiful poem Dad xxxx

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you sweetheart :)
      Love you lots as always xxxx

  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Michael , I think in the 5th line it is sacred instead of scared, please correct it if I am right.
    This is the thing with love. I mean it happens to you and you find that one person in the billions made only for you.
    I think you got lucky to have her in your life as your wife. As in love this happens very rarely that the person you love, loves you back.

    • 2 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you for the typo error Lucifer, now changed :)

      This piece is actually for two friends of mine who are getting married, after difficult relationships before.

      But I totally agree with your words if it was myself in the situation