Comments : Desired love

  • 5 days ago

    by Em

    This is astounding work

  • 5 days ago

    by mossgirl19

    V@n, I agree with Em, this is astounding! I love it just the way it is although the last line in the first stanza was longer than the others. Your rhymes are properly managed here. I particularly like the third stanza. I think it is absolutely sweet. :-)

  • 5 days ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Hopeful and beautifully written - well done!