Comments : My Apology

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Angela
    Such a beautiful little piece

    Much love

    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Thank you Michael. It is a little piece - have only just come back on this site and it's all I've written recently! Hope you are well. Love, Angie. X

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ms. Angie, this is short and yet so beautiful. I love your imagery very much.

  • 2 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Thank you. Just getting back into writing again.

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    This is astounding work and sometimes we have to wrap up our hearts so they don't get hurt again. I like the upbeaty rhythm to this - if read aloud it seems like a heart beating quickly which is pretty awesome.

    Take care
    Em x

  • 2 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Em. Thank you for your comments. That's precisely what it was meant to sound like! Very intuitive of you! X

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A very neat and well rhymed piece which flows like water over glass.

    Love Ben

  • 2 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Thank you. x

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful piece full of imagery and soul. It's emotion weaves a spell that could melt the stoniest of heart. Milly x