Comments : to you dear poets

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    Mark this is beautifully done - your words are always a breathe of fresh air.

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    What more can I say, Mark? I am speechless and breathless too. Lovely!

  • 2 months ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This was a delight to read. So full of joy and playfulness. It was beautifully poetic with it's use of language. The words and images that rose from this poem were almost dream-like.

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Lovely piece of writing hiraeth, and wonderful imagery throughout.

    Such beauty

    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Britt

    My lord this is beautiful.

  • 2 months ago

    by Tonia

    Absolutely wonderful. Well done! Good write. x

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, love this, so much beautiful thought in these words. Well done-

  • 2 months ago

    by BlueJay

    So completely wonderful, you have a nack for taking unusual descriptions and using them in common ways or vice versa and you also have such a unique voice that I have loved for years. This, of course, is absolutely no exception. I especially love how you made it feel like you could be talking directly to any one of us, talking to us as a whole, or even talking to yourself in a way. Stunning.

  • 2 months ago

    by Everlasting

    Uhmm my soils are idk. They lack some nutrients. I'm trying to replenish them with lots of them but it's hard to get my callous hands on them...
    specially when I don't know which nutrients are needed... oh well, in the mean time I just enjoy tending the soil and planting some seeds...

    Enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    To be honest, after reading this poem, I think I should quit poetry.
    My soils has no nutrients and my versus are not stringed together.
    But I think that your tongue is coated with syrup ; your poems have purpose and poise and I am sure the first time you took your breath the air was inundated with poetry.

    And I think I should spend hours reading your poems, so that I can learn how to breathe poems all the time.

    Please don't be so modest. I mean after writing something like this you dedicated it to your fellow poets.
    Yeah, they are good but you are better.

    No wonder why your poems win the weekly contests, and I am pretty sure this one will too.

  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Congratulations senyru.

    The most deserving one.

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations on your win.

  • 2 months ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    This is a well crafted poem! Most definitely deserving of the win that it earned! Incredible job!!

  • 1 month ago

    by Justen Smith

    Absolutely love this. I'm lost for words which is Ironic.

  • 1 month ago

    by Britt

    Judging comment: This is the stuff. I wish I had words and I so desperately want to give this poem the proper comment but every time I pick apart and piece through, I only feel like I can 'breathe'. An ode to fellow poets, those of us who get one another even if we truly don't, in that longing desire and understanding. The nooks and crannies of the palms - so tender and gentle yet fierce. I loved every single bit of this poem, and hope it gets highlighted on the front page for everyone to see. Beautiful, beautiful stuff.