Comments : Drink!

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    I have no words for this other than fantastic!!

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    Double post

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Omg...now this is bloody fantastic. I love the playfulness in contrast to the content, it worked really well. I love the pace too. Whew, great write!

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    love the story and the rhyming in your piece, and well structured Mark

    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Mark, a really cool write. It was intertaining through out. Well done-

  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Another brilliant piece of work I read today.
    No doubts why it is nominated.

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Love this!
    "Toxins return violently to the floor" GENIUS!
    For reasons I can't explain though (maybe I'm not 'poet-ey' enough yet) the image this conjured in my head was of an olde worlde pub of yore, with large tankards of ale being served by wenches! Lol.
    Great write :-)
    =^.^=

    • 1 month ago

      by Mark

      That's the imagery I was trying to convey!! Well I was going to mention the 'wenches' lol...didn't want to offend

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this it conjured up very vivid imagery and had great rhythm and rhyme. An excellent piece x