Comments : Moonlight Drawn by Clouds

  • 3 months ago

    by tobias kinti

    wonderfully written, great work!

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mel, this is beautiful. The imagery is outstanding. I hope someone nominates this as I am already out.

    All the best as ever,

    Ben

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    This is the thing with love.
    And if you know how to express it through poetry you end up with such beautiful pieces.

  • 3 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Truly Lovely Mel

    Craig x

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    I have read this a few times now and every time it seems to touch me more. Distance apparently makes the heart grow fonder and you truly don't realise this until you've been parted by distance from the one you love.

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Lady Mel, this is just lovely! It had me going awwwww, more than once. Hugs-

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss M

    This is so so romantic and literally beautiful.
    'In that way you and me
    will stare at the same moon'
    Sublime :)
    Lovely

    Much love
    Michael :)

  • 3 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Very lovely Mel, written in simplistic prose that brings out the strong ties of Love which knows no length of time or boundaries, it clings like a grape to a vine!
    Would have Nominated but as usual I was to be the next in line.
    Added to my Favorites!
    Love Ya

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Well done Miss Mel with a great winning piece. Really pleased for you :)

    Michael x

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you a ton, Michael, for your support always!

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Mel, well done on this - it is an honour to share the front page with you.

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Please...it is the other way around! Thank you from the moon to your sun. :-)

  • 3 months ago

    by Jied

    Nice one mel..

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hey, thank you, Jied. Great to hear from you!

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Lady Mel, congratulations on your front page write! It really is a lovely poem. Hugs-

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Hugs too Queen Brenda and thank you.

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Congratulations Mel..

  • 3 months ago

    by Matt Carroll

    Wonderfully written.

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    JUDGING COMMENT:
    Moonlight Drawn by Clouds by mossgirl19 points: 10
    Mel (like most people here) has a very unique style and this piece is no different and is in my opinion by far one of her best pieces I've read. It distinctively speaks of the patience we need when dealing with a long distance relationship and the questioning of why in some instances their day is our night and vice versa but it shows there's no greater love than the one Mel speaks of and to her it's one of real love which shows throughout the piece. A beautiful image is brought out through her words, bravo.