Mel, as you know through our pms, I think this is beautiful. It has all the qualities a tanka should have, from the syllable count to the theme of love that makes up the content. Wonderful write.

All the best,
Ben

Short...sweet...beautiful :)

Michael :)

Hey, friend! Like my other poems pretty please? If u have something of your liking on any of my poems's titles! And by the way, I gave a like on this one! Take care, my friend... ;)

Hey, friend! Like my other poems pretty please? If u have something of your liking on any of my poems's titles! And by the way, I gave a like on this one! Take care, my friend... ;)