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by Michael Aug 16, 2017
Life, society /
meaning of life
Eyes peer with guilt; beneath a tulle-net veil
her peevishness; steeped in silken black
Inheritance pours; filling an insatiable grail
She stands arms folded; her eyes rolled back
I caught a glint; in her gloss-lipped smile
as he was lowered; unto a reapers trench
she sighs; a relief from lungs of denial
her mouth watering; with a thirsty quench.
No tears were shed; from her ashen-shame face;
watching us weep; when we scattered the dust
upon his heart; laid in a cold walnut-case.
but at least he’s free; from her narcissistic lust!
His death gives repose; as her life is born
we walked away; in a grief-stricken wave
not a penny; or pound she’ll spend in mourn!
karma; echoes cries of her; to an early grave
by Meena Krish
I like this form and I liked the topic you have chosen to
write for this form. The story unfolds step by step and the rhymes
flow with ease taking us along on the ride...excellent!
L-o-v-e love love this !!!
Thanks Em for lovely words :)
by Maple Tree
You got this!!! This is one of my favorite forms, this is beautiful...dark...and just wow!
Thank you Miss Andrea :)
nominated.. the end. well done
Thank you Miss nams along with your nomination :)
What a captivating dark piece. It was wonderfully worded all the way. Very atmospheric. Great work here, Michael.
Thank you Miss M :)