Comments : Untitled

  • 3 months ago

    by Mark

    I really like this. Uniquely structured and the content exploring vulnerability.

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    This is majestic

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Never give up on that feeling, Mel. You are too young to withdraw entirely from the the game of love - even if it is the most dangerous one we can play. Yes, the stakes are high and we risk so much...but that's because of the massive potential rewards.

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Ben! Aww yes, a gamble indeed it is! Thank you.

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Thank God you have started to dream again.
    I mean as long as you are dreaming, we will get to read such beautiful poems.
    So keep on dreaming and never quit, because the day you stop, it will become hard for us to breathe.
    We are addicted to your poems.

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      This comment has just inspired me to dream more! Means a lot. Thanks, V!

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Miss Mel :)

    Keep your dreams flowing and magic coming with pieces of writing like this

    Well done

    Michael :)

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      I have indeed been dreaming lately...of a love that comes from within. :-)
      Thank you, Michael.

  • 3 months ago

    by Augustus Black

    A delightful work.

    I think love is knocking at your heart and I know you won't take much long letting it come in.

    The time has come to dream, to fly,
    and to touch the sky.

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you, AB, now I am tempted to fly with your words!

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    What a lovely piece to read Mel

    • 3 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you very much, Nams!

  • 3 months ago

    by The Po whet

    Lovely write ,I enjoyed every bit to the last word.

  • 2 months ago

    by ROAM

    Oh wow, I absolutely, positively, most definitely love this piece! It's hopeful and real.... please dream on if it means you'll give us more poems like this one