The Magic Of The Moon (haiku)

by Ben Pickard   Aug 20, 2017


Hypnotic moonshine
powders the landscape silver
and magic is born


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  • 1 month ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I love magic and watching the moon

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    Words fail me again

  • 1 month ago

    by Jamie


    I don't know if anyone has pointed this out but i love how there seems to be two meanings to the poems here. Its a clever one because you could be actually talking about the moon itself, and how nighttime is a magical place. And the moon itself it magical to some people. But-

    You could also same the same thing about the alcoholic drink lol. And it would work either way. As i said i loved how there are two meanings to me here, you give the reader a chance to let their imagination run.

    Now that i think about it, you put this under haiku and i am assuming my first paragraph is correct. Either way, well done.

    • 1 month ago

      by Ben Pickard

      It was about the moon, Jamie, but I love your other interpretation!

  • 1 month ago


    Hey Ben, how are you able to pack so much into so few words?

    Nice work!

  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    I totally agree.
    Every time you powder your thoughts on the landscape of your heart - magic is born. It hypnotizes us to not just read, like or comment on them, but to nominate them too.

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