Comments : Time only exists when you do not look at me

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ironic how time stopped when I read this. Beautifully worded setting an almost perfect scene.

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    No words can express my enjoyment from this poem except one..
    "Nominated"

    Well done Frank on a Beautiful piece.

    • 3 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you so much dee

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Frank really have no words to describe this
    beautiful poem. Especially, after reading

    Your beauty is perfection
    paradise is those brief instants
    that your eyes bridge to my soul
    across the abysmal breach of this world.

    I want to write so much, but it's like as I begin to look at this wonder you created time stops, because

    Time only exists
    When I do not look at this wonderful piece of yours.

    Truly a win.

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Frank

    This is a beauty fella, absolutely wonderful

    Michael :)

  • 3 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Thanks everyone

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Frank, this is just beautiful. Had me awwwing throughout the read. Just lovely!

  • 3 months ago

    by silvershoes

    It really is a beautiful poem. Very well done.

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Congratulations Frank..

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Congratulations Frank! Stellar write!

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congratulations Frank...(smile)

  • 3 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    A beautiful and passionate write...simply loved the
    poem! Congrats on the Win!

    ps: you still remind me of a poet I once knew....keep penning!

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Congrats Frank

  • 3 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Thanks everyone.

  • 1 month ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment

    The title drew me in and I was thinking about it a lot before
    I started to read the actual poem. The flow of this poem is
    alluring as well as descriptive. There is a tone of passion within
    these words without making it too overdone. I also like how the
    title was used to break the stanzas up it makes us feel, think and
    just sink into the words…a lovely read which I enjoyed!