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by Tony Aug 25, 2017
Life, society /
A dark hole shining in a sea of blue,
Obscured by a veil of angry clouds;
The masses crane their necks in awe.
But me? I just see my reflection.
A shadow in the core of brilliance,
Enveloped in monotony,
Blanketed in controlled rage,
Causing those who look, to turn away...
by Ben Pickard
I love how you have managed to use the eclipse as a metaphor for your own emotions.
Well done, Tony.
I agree with Ben... Eclipse viewed differently... And was perfect to describe how you see yourself.