Comments : Lavender And Rainbows

  • 2 months ago

    by Mark

    Fantastic! The rhyming structure of first-third line, second-fourth is not an easy one to do whilst maintaining a consistent theme. And you did it so well with Love combined with a sense of playfulness and sweetness. I'm in awe of the talent here.

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ben, the romance between lavender and rainbow is just breathtaking and beautiful. Loved every bit of this. Sweet!!!

  • 2 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Yes it is true wherever the seeds of your poem spread, flowers grow(only you know what I mean)
    This is beautiful, Ben, seeing you writing a poem about love.
    One of the most beautiful poem ever read.
    Words choice, the lines, everything magical.
    Three word title, three stanzas, saying those three most beautiful words to someone........

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, L. I don't write too many love poems so I try my best when I do!

  • 2 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, as always I love to read your poems. This is no exception. A beautiful love poem for your true love. Well done my friend-

    • 2 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Hi, Brenda. It struck me that I don't write enough of these.

  • 2 months ago

    by Em

    Absolutely stunning Ben as always and because you rarely write love poetry it's even more beautiful than others if you get my meaning

  • 2 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I adore your writings on love. Take care and be blessed.

  • 2 months ago

    by Shane

    You're too good making a poem so 'flowy' and descriptive in a way I imagine the scenery like I was there. Amazing Ben!