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This is extremely powerful !!
I agree with Em, a lot of power in this write. Well done-
by Mandy Earl
I have to be boring and agree with the other comments! Very powerful, I love the metaphors.
by Meena Krish
I don't want to sound like a broken record...but this
this is just so emotionally charged yet the way its penned
as a reader I can feel the simmering emotions behind them
which has been penned here with such calm..lovely!
Pat, great to read new stuff from you...you just slayed it again. Seamless and flowed very well.
Holy crap. Favoriting this one.
by Avrii Monrielle
Yup... this is good stuff
Can you dedicate a poem to me?
depends! I would be happy to write for you.
Somehow this question isn't leaving my head: How does yesterday create your future?
its just a thought, like our past helps dictate our actions today which creates our future