Comments : she was here, she was always here

  • 1 month ago

    by Em

    This is extremely powerful !!

  • 1 month ago

    by Brenda

    I agree with Em, a lot of power in this write. Well done-

  • 1 month ago

    by Mandy Earl

    I have to be boring and agree with the other comments! Very powerful, I love the metaphors.

  • 1 month ago

    by Meena Krish

    I don't want to sound like a broken record...but this
    this is just so emotionally charged yet the way its penned
    as a reader I can feel the simmering emotions behind them
    which has been penned here with such calm..lovely!

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Pat, great to read new stuff from you...you just slayed it again. Seamless and flowed very well.

  • 1 month ago

    by Britt

    Holy crap. Favoriting this one.

  • 1 month ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Yup... this is good stuff

    Can you dedicate a poem to me?

    • 1 month ago

      by pmmurphy

      depends! I would be happy to write for you.