Comments : Black and blue (collaboration with Maple Tree)

  • 3 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Em,

    You and I have known for a while now that we connect within our writing and experiences. Writing this with you, intertwining our darkness just seemed like the perfect poem in my eyes. Thank you, for writing this with me... I adore you!!

  • 3 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ladies, this is just about good enough to earn my precious nomination... :)

    Seamless and wonderfully written.

    All the very best as ever,

    Ben

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ladies, ladies, ladies...amazing collabs you two! I'm glad Ben nominated this. This deserves front page honors.

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Seriously, no words to express what you two have created. The pace poem gets from the 2nd stanza, it lasts till the end.
    Such poems bring tears to our eyes and leave us speechless.

    But would like to say something when I look closely,I see this poem appearing on the front page.

    And what Ben did and Brenda said..this heartfelt write deserves every bit of it.

  • 3 months ago

    by Mandy Earl

    Jeez....I've lived this. It frightens me and makes me want to weep. I wish I could nominate this. It's going under my favorites. It's horribly beautiful, in all it's pain.

    • 3 months ago

      by Maple Tree

      Thank you everyone... Em and I wanted to touch people, to let them know they are not alone....I'm in tears...

      Hugs you Mandy!

  • 3 months ago

    by Jamie

    Great poem you two! <3

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Speechless. This is such a powerful write. Great collab, Duchess and Ms. Andi.

    • 3 months ago

      by Em

      Andrea - thank you for asking me to do this I must say it's one of the best collabs I have done and one I am.proud of because if it makes one person realise they aren't alone then it's a job well done. It was a pleasure to work with you.

      Thank you all for your wonderful comments they truly have made my heart warm.

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    What an incredible piece lady poets :)
    A really touching piece

    Much love and warmth x

  • 3 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You ladies did an amazing Job. Enjoyed reading as always. Be blessed

  • 3 months ago

    by Kireasha L

    Ladies,
    This was well spoken, a sad reality for someone who's experienced violent behaviors. The world needs to read more pieces written about the silent terrors of a "black and blue" soul. Thank you ladies for this brilliant write.

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    Phenomenal write you two. Well done!