Comments : Blurred Perspection:

  • 1 year ago

    by Tony

    This is genius. I'd nominate if I could. Give it a once over, there's a few grammatical errors, a "their" that should be "they're," but that's all just polish. Get it? Polish? Anyway, the message is beautiful, regardless of the cover.

    • 1 year ago

      by Scott Cole

      Any more errors, I fixed one

    • 1 year ago

      by Tony

      Starring to Staring, alot to "a lot," "nobody shouldn't" should be "nobody should," or "no one should."

    • 1 year ago

      by Scott Cole

      Thanks man I'm not so great with my grammar at times....

    • 1 year ago

      by Tony

      No problem, I've just peen picked apart a few times for it myself lol.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Another inspiring piece Scott.

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I know that "never judge a book by its cover" is a very popular saying, but you've showcased beautifully what that really means here ... the true story of a person lies beneath the shiny (or not) facade that we can see.
    But I also felt that by using 'mirrors' in your poem, you're also touching on how we judge ourselves by what we see in the mirror?
    I really enjoyed this :-)
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by Someone Invisible

    And beauty only wears a grin,
    Every now and then.

    By far one of the best worded sentences I've read in a while. I really like this poem, its very heartwarming and touching.

  • 1 year ago

    by Lucifer

    Do not judge by appearances; a rich heart may be under a poor coat.

    Well penned Scott.

    Flow, rhythm, word choice.. Everything.
    Glad to see it is nominated.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    LOVE this. Well done!

  • 8 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful written. Beauty comes from within. All the best