Comments : A Grievance Against The Trees (English sonnet)

  • 3 months ago

    by Mark

    Amazing Ben, I'm just in awe of this

  • 3 months ago

    by Mandy Earl

    Wow, gorgeous, and I tend to love the coming of autumn, but I love the ode to summer poem. I keep rereading it because it's so great!

    -Mandy

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    Ben I just can't comment on this - it's too beautiful and delicately done. I'm glad summer (well what summer we had is over) but not looking forward to winter either. Autumn and spring are my favourites I can't choose one.

    All the best
    Em x

    • 3 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, Em. Personally, summer is the only month I can stand.

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    I love winter.
    And Thank god the sun of your talent is getting brighter as we are moving towards the winter.
    Only it's rays(poems) will keep us warm throughout the winter.

    Thank you.

    • 3 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you, L

    • 3 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Me too! Especially the snow, but not if I'm on my motorbike. That's a different kettle of fish.

      Craig

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, our sonnet king, once again you have honoured us with a beautiful write. Fall is my favorite season, I just love the colors. It too makes me sad because of the coming season. This is just stunning my friend, stunning...

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Super sonnet Ben,

    I can feel your wintry blues
    nice one my friend as ever with your wonderful sonnets

    Michael :)

  • 3 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Splendid work as always dude.

    Do not mourne out falling
    For us our work is done
    There is still something so beautiful
    About a winters sun.

    We worked away to create oxygen
    To you all this is our gift
    It sucks the life out of us all
    This photosynthesis

    We change our shade and colour
    As we flutter down and take our leave
    A gift from mom for a winters bride
    Nature's pure confetti

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Well, Mr. Summer, this is so beautifully written. We have no winter over here, but summer is best.

    Your sonnets are really lovely, Ben. I can spend my day just reading through your page. I really hope to write one soon. :-))

  • 3 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    'You dress your limbs and tease us all'
    Brilliant line! This is lovely Ben and I'm one of those that mourns summer too.
    =^.^=

  • 3 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    I wish you could see me clapping right now! I like Sonnets
    and when they are done tastefully that too about nature well
    it becomes my all time favorite! You are becoming one fine writer
    and soon you will be publishing!

    • 3 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I don't know about that, Meena but thank you anyway!

  • 3 months ago

    by Sherry Caayupan

    I love the flow of this poem! Two thumbs up! Can you like some of my other poems? I gave a like on this! Have a nice day... ;)

  • 3 months ago

    by Phil

    you had me at the title haha